Hola, Reader!
Today I am sharing one of my own poems, “Mechanical Heart”. I bet you can guess what this poem is about! Share your “guess” in the comments below. π
Enjoy!
Metal fingers weaving through
A copper metal mind,
Tiny leaves, electric nerves
Zipping through a wire spine.
Little houses, tiny roads,
Pathways to a program
Every cord bearing a load,
Every wire in its place.
Grey dwellings, living orders,
Plotted on a green field.
Zeroes, ones, telling errors,
Off, on, levers of thought.
A drum beat,
Rising heat,
Cheering fans,
Cooling off.
Gentle whirring,
Lightning brain.
Metal burning,
But no pain.
A body with no legs,
A mind with no grey matter;
Compartments for JPEGs,
A housed mechanical heart.
What do you think this poem is about? Did you like it? Do you have any critiques or tips for this poem? Comment below! π
Have a great week! Keep on writing!
-Anne
This was neat!! I’ve never seen something so inanimate described with such feeling. This was a perspective! π
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Thank you! βΊοΈ I really appreciate this. π
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